Part 3: The Mysterious Travellers - Revision history

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Can the sheep survive until the sun?
The admiral insists there is a cult
"Please prevent the sheep's assau..."

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The Mysterious Travellers

At dawn the cart will come 
Can the sheep survive until the sun? 
The admiral insists there is a cult 
"Please prevent the sheep's assault!" 

"A house burns down during a storm. 
This bad luck is not the norm! 
Kids simply vanish in the night 
No one even knows their plight." 

They say it's all a secret church 
Leaving these people to have to search 
"Where is this very secret place?" 
"Secret places pass without a trace!" 

Nigel says "I'll go and check in the trees" 
But it is When who ends up upon her knees. 
"Three men passed through here. 
I see their footprints, its very clear." 

Mara replied "Let me see that! 
"One must be an elf or else I'm a cat! 
They used no torches. They see in the night. 
These enemies would give us quite a fight." 

When said "Look, do you see this ground? 
They laid down their packs. This grass is unwound." 
Nigel goes up a notch of intensity 
He can not help his crazy propensity 

When carries around a green leather book 
Nigel did worry but changes his outlook. 
The bard thinks there may be a spy 
But When says he's just being a silly guy. 

Lioniel's bag now feels very light 
And he thinks it time for him to recite. 
He makes a stage out of his shield, 
Then sings about Gold out in the field. 

"Do we need to bathe, Admiral, sir?" 
"Most certainly, I do concur!" 
The boys go first heading to the spring 
Leoniel moves to remove Nigel's armour and bling 

The bard grabs a single string with a yank 
The armour flies off and onto the bank 
He grabs the end of Nigel's belt and yanks 
Revealing his butt which he leans in and spanks 

Reluctantly When approaches the water 
And Mara offers her no quarter 
When gasps out in fear but Mara ushes her 
Into the spring like a small dear 

When completely loses her smell 
Mara stops, hearing her inner alarm bell 
"Get dressed and quickly, we are being watched" 
And the cleaning of When is once more botched. 

"Sir Nigel someone is skulking about!" 
"How dare they? I'll break the villainous lout!" 
Sword is drawn and towards the wood they go 
Then Nigel relaxes as if he suffered a blow. 

Mara calls out to the men in the wood 
"Come out before I show you real womanhood!" 
A voice says "Your smoking gave us away. 
Sometimes I don't know why I let you stay." 

The men say they have lost their friend 
They are worried he came to a perilous end. 
The party listen to their sad plight 
Sounds like they had had a rough night. 

So our heroes meet Kaden and Dakota 
Suspicious at first but then not an iota. 
The Admiral says "Ahh you met this association. 
I can now tell you we are a secret organisation!"

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 Lioniel's bag now feels very light<br/>
 And he thinks it is time for him to recite.<br/>
-He makes a stage out of his shield,<br/>
+He makes a small stage out of his shield,<br/>
 Then sings about Gold out in the field.<br/>
@@ Line 44: / Line 44: @@
 "Most certainly, I do concur!"<br/>
 The boys go first heading to the spring<br/>
-Leoniel moves to remove Nigel's armour and bling<br/>
+Leoniel helps remove Nigel's armour and bling<br/>
 The bard grabs a single string with a yank<br/>
@@ Line 53: / Line 53: @@
 Reluctantly When approaches the water<br/>
 And Mara offers her no quarter<br/>
-When gasps out in fear but Mara gives her a steer<br/>
+When gasps out but Mara gives her a steer<br/>
 Right into the spring like a small deer<br/>

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 '''The Mysterious Travellers'''
-At dawn the cart will come<br/>
+At dawn the animal's cart will come<br/>
 Can the sheep survive until the sun?<br/>
-The admiral insists there is a cult<br/>
+The Admiral insists there is a cult<br/>
 "Please prevent the sheep's assault!"<br/>

@@ Line 12: / Line 12: @@
 "They say it's all a secret church<br/>
-Leaving these people to have to search<"br/>
+Leaving these people to have to search"<br/>
 "Where is this very secret place?"<br/>
 "Secret places pass without a trace!"<br/>

@@ Line 11: / Line 11: @@
 No one even knows their plight."<br/>
-They say it's all a secret church<br/>
+"They say it's all a secret church<br/>
-Leaving these people to have to search<br/>
+Leaving these people to have to search<"br/>
 "Where is this very secret place?"<br/>
 "Secret places pass without a trace!"<br/>
@@ Line 18: / Line 18: @@
 Nigel says "I'll go and check in the trees"<br/>
 But it is When who ends up upon her knees.<br/>
-"Three men passed through here.<br/>
+"Three men passed right through here.<br/>
 I see their footprints, its very clear."<br/>
@@ Line 33: / Line 33: @@
 When carries around a green leather book<br/>
 Nigel did worry but changes his outlook.<br/>
-The bard thinks there may be a spy<br/>
+The bard thinks that there may be a spy<br/>
 But When says he's just being a silly guy.<br/>
 Lioniel's bag now feels very light<br/>
-And he thinks it time for him to recite.<br/>
+And he thinks it is time for him to recite.<br/>
 He makes a stage out of his shield,<br/>
 Then sings about Gold out in the field.<br/>
@@ Line 53: / Line 53: @@
 Reluctantly When approaches the water<br/>
 And Mara offers her no quarter<br/>
-When gasps out in fear but Mara ushes her<br/>
+When gasps out in fear but Mara gives her a steer<br/>
-Into the spring like a small dear<br/>
+Right into the spring like a small deer<br/>
 When completely loses her smell<br/>
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 Then Nigel relaxes as if he suffered a blow.<br/>
-Mara calls out to the men in the wood<br/>
+Mara calls out to the men hid in the wood<br/>
 "Come out before I show you real womanhood!"<br/>
 A voice says "Your smoking gave us away.<br/>
 Sometimes I don't know why I let you stay."<br/>
-The men say they have lost their friend<br/>
+The men say they have lost a good friend<br/>
 They are worried he came to a perilous end.<br/>
 The party listen to their sad plight<br/>
-Sounds like they had had a rough night.<br/>
+Sounds like they had had a very rough night.<br/>
 So our heroes meet Kaden and Dakota<br/>

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Part 3: The Mysterious Travellers - Revision history

Damon at 00:37, 10 November 2020

Damon at 06:34, 2 November 2020

Damon at 06:02, 2 November 2020

Damon at 06:02, 2 November 2020

Damon at 23:48, 1 November 2020

Damon: Created page with "The Mysterious Travellers At dawn the cart will come Can the sheep survive until the sun? The admiral insists there is a cult "Please prevent the sheep's assau..."

Damon: Created page with "The Mysterious Travellers At dawn the cart will come
Can the sheep survive until the sun?
The admiral insists there is a cult
"Please prevent the sheep's assau..."