Ben: fixed a couple of spelling mistakes

2016-10-25T12:06:10Z

fixed a couple of spelling mistakes

Ben: syncd content on mekzig

2016-06-13T15:11:28Z

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Now divine, but as a man, Mekzig united the tribes of the uplands and
conquered the last remaining city states of Ancient Republic over six
hundred years ago. Born a noblemen in the small town of Trisenfeld,
two days ride from present day Meredi, Mekzig led a revolt against the
Republic and captured the city of Meredi. The battle was decisive and
the vicotry was all the other tribes needed to come in behind Mekzig's
leadership. Soon, the other cities of the Republic were to fall to
Mekzig's upland army. Within Mekzig's lifetime he united the upland
populations into one kingdom and founded the first dynasty of
Ephereus. Mekzig though had a diffcult relationship with his two sons
and daughter. He drove them to rule the other cities of the Dyafice.
His son, Temotig was sent to Lugusnon, his daughter, Auterell to
Claviscero and youngest son Makiron to Valentia. But the disapora of
Mekzig's children across the new kingdom was to tragedy. In Lugusnon,
the heir to throne, Makiron, became entralled by the teachings of
Toch'thon of Telopmin and married Toch'thon's daughter. Enraged by
the alliance with the northerners, Mekzig asked his daughter Auterell
to investigate what was going on in Lugusnon but when Auterell
returned to Meredi with news that the her brother was unmoved by his
father's demands Mekzig rode straight for Lugusnon. Upon his arrival
he was greeted with open arms by Temotig. Temotig tried to convince
his father of the power behind Toch'thon's teachings but Mekzig hated
all forms of divination and magic. Temotig then tried to turn his new
skills against Mekzig and charm him into compliance but it failed.
Mekzig, disgusted by his son's betrayal decided to leave lugusnon on
the following day but he never awoke. In the morning, Mekzig was
found dead, having choked to death. However, Mekzig, the tactician
that he was planned for such an event and Auterell, upon not seeing
Mekzig ride out of the gates at dawn was to attack and slay the
Temotig line. Using her highly trained hand to hand fighters,
Auterell slipped into the city and captured her brother's family and
Toch'thon. With the family imprisoned, Mekzig's speical guard then
entered the city and disarmed all forces loyal to Temotig. At noon
the following day, the family were taken to the city centre and
impaled on timber poles and left to be devoured by vultures. It would
be Temotig's patricide, under Auterell's steely hand that would led to
the rites and edicts which continue to this day.

Mekzig's beliefs and teachings have had a long lasting legacy on the
way people live today. His hatred of all forms of magic has come to
structure the relgious institutions which rule the two kingdoms, his
system of government, known as the Chair and Robe system, continues to
this day where trusted consuls are appointed locally and are advised
by a member of the clergy.

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 Now divine, but as a man, Mekzig united the tribes of the uplands and
 conquered the last remaining city states of Ancient Republic over six
-hundred years ago.  Born a noblemen in the small town of Trisenfeld,
+hundred years ago. Born a noblemen in the small town of Trisenfeld,
 two days ride from present day Meredi, Mekzig led a revolt against the
-Republic and captured the city of Meredi.  The battle was decisive and
+Republic and captured the city of Meredi. The battle was decisive and
-the vicotry was all the other tribes needed to come in behind Mekzig's
+the victory was all the other tribes needed to come in behind Mekzig's
-leadership.  Soon, the other cities of the Republic were to fall to
+leadership. Soon, the other cities of the Republic were to fall to
-Mekzig's upland army.  Within Mekzig's lifetime he united the upland
+Mekzig's upland army. Within Mekzig's lifetime he united the upland
 populations into one kingdom and founded the first dynasty of
-Ephereus.  Mekzig though had a diffcult relationship with his two sons
+Ephereus. Mekzig though had a diffcult relationship with his two sons
-and daughter.  He drove them to rule the other cities of the Dyafice.
+and daughter. He drove them to rule the other cities of the Dyafice.
 His son, Temotig was sent to Lugusnon, his daughter, Auterell to
-Claviscero and youngest son Makiron to Valentia.  But the disapora of
+Claviscero and youngest son Makiron to Valentia. But the disapora of
-Mekzig's children across the new kingdom was to tragedy.  In Lugusnon,
+Mekzig's children across the new kingdom was to end in tragedy. In
-the heir to throne, Makiron, became entralled by the teachings of
+Lugusnon, the heir to throne, Makiron, became entralled by the
-Toch'thon of Telopmin and married Toch'thon's daughter.  Enraged by
+teachings of Toch'thon of Telopmin and married Toch'thon's daughter.
-the alliance with the northerners, Mekzig asked his daughter Auterell
+Enraged by the alliance with the northerners, Mekzig asked his
-to investigate what was going on in Lugusnon but when Auterell
+daughter Auterell to investigate what was going on in Lugusnon but
-returned to Meredi with news that the her brother was unmoved by his
+when Auterell returned to Meredi with news that the her brother was
-father's demands Mekzig rode straight for Lugusnon.  Upon his arrival
+unmoved by his father's demands Mekzig rode straight for Lugusnon.
-he was greeted with open arms by Temotig.  Temotig tried to convince
+Upon his arrival he was greeted with open arms by Temotig. Temotig
-his father of the power behind Toch'thon's teachings but Mekzig hated
+tried to convince his father of the power behind Toch'thon's teachings
-all forms of divination and magic.  Temotig then tried to turn his new
+but Mekzig hated all forms of divination and magic. Temotig then tried
-skills against Mekzig and charm him into compliance but it failed.
+to turn his new skills against Mekzig and charm him into compliance
-Mekzig, disgusted by his son's betrayal decided to leave lugusnon on
+but it failed. Mekzig, disgusted by his son's betrayal decided to
-the following day but he never awoke.  In the morning, Mekzig was
+leave lugusnon on the following day but he never awoke. In the
-found dead, having choked to death.  However, Mekzig, the tactician
+morning, Mekzig was found dead, having choked to death. However,
-that he was planned for such an event and Auterell, upon not seeing
+Mekzig, the tactician that he was planned for such an event and
-Mekzig ride out of the gates at dawn was to attack and slay the
+Auterell, upon not seeing Mekzig ride out of the gates at dawn was to
-Temotig line.  Using her highly trained hand to hand fighters,
+attack and slay the Temotig line. Using her highly trained hand to
-Auterell slipped into the city and captured her brother's family and
+hand fighters, Auterell slipped into the city and captured her
-Toch'thon.  With the family imprisoned, Mekzig's speical guard then
+brother's family and Toch'thon. With the family imprisoned, Mekzig's
-entered the city and disarmed all forces loyal to Temotig.  At noon
+speical guard then entered the city and disarmed all forces loyal to
-the following day, the family were taken to the city centre and
+Temotig. At noon the following day, the family were taken to the city
-impaled on timber poles and left to be devoured by vultures.  It would
+centre and impaled on timber poles and left to be devoured by
-be Temotig's patricide, under Auterell's steely hand that would led to
+vultures. It would be Temotig's patricide, under Auterell's steely
-the rites and edicts which continue to this day.
+hand that would led to the rites and edicts which continue to this
 Mekzig's beliefs and teachings have had a long lasting legacy on the

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