Dwarves - Revision history

Ben: corrections to typos on Dhwarves page

2016-06-13T12:46:27Z

corrections to typos on Dhwarves page

Ben: Updates the dhwarven description

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Updates the dhwarven description

Ben: Consolidated notes on dhwarves to single page

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Damon at 12:07, 14 September 2015

2015-09-14T12:07:07Z

Damon at 12:06, 14 September 2015

2015-09-14T12:06:54Z

Damon: Created page with "Now Nomads in the outreaches and uplands beyond the Dyafice, their search for a homeland goes on."

2015-03-02T23:57:54Z

Created page with "Now Nomads in the outreaches and uplands beyond the Dyafice, their search for a homeland goes on."

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Now Nomads in the outreaches and uplands beyond the Dyafice, their search for a homeland goes on.

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 Peristi avoid settling down and prefer an itinerant lifesysle moving
 from town to town along the north face of the Dyafice. Across the two
-kingdoms they are are still in demand, woring the many mines of the
+kingdoms they are are still in demand, working the many mines of the
-north face and many provinces depend on their masonry for
+north face and many provincial governments depend on their masonry
-fortifications, aqueducts, bridges and roads.
+skills for the construction and maintenace of fortifications,
 The Peristi predeliction for mobility harkens back to the last days of
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 about by the insanity of an elven ruler who tried to draw down the
 divine into this world. In those days, the Peristi maintained strong
-ties with elvenfolk but now approach them and the crafts with
+ties with elvenfolk but now approach them and their crafts with
 trepidation and disdain.
 Persisti argue that the problem with elves is not only their vanity
 but also their approach to politics and government. Ask a Peristi what
-she thinks of elves today, and your response, after rolling the eyes
+she thinks of elves today, and her response, after rolling the eyes
 would be `if tedious mind-numbing routine is too daring for ya, then
 go work with the elves.' But on a serious note, Peristi believe it was
 the elvish tendency to overthink things that blinded them to the
-madness of their own rulers. To this day, the Persiti believe they are
+madness of their own rulers. To this day, the Peristi believe they are
-the antithesis to this and are highly suspsicious of hierarchical
+the antithesis to the elvish mindset and are highly suspsicious of
-organisations, elvish or not.
+hierarchical organisations, elvish or not.
 Peristi have abandoned their former gods and now leave these debates
-to men and elves. But their songs and bardic tales are second to none
+to men and elves. But their songs of lore and bardic tales are second
-and few festivals across the two kingdoms would be complete without
+to none and few festivals across the two kingdoms would be complete
-the performances of a Peristi troupe.
+without the performances of a Peristi troupe.
-= Appearance =
+== Appearance ==
-The majority of Persisti have an olive complexion and dark brown eyes.
+The Peristi have an olive complexion and dark brown eyes. The men
-The men prefer moustaches and goatees to full beards, wear a wide
+prefer moustaches and goatees to full beards, wear a wide array of
-array of felt hats, prefer vests of striking knitted patterns and fur
+felt hats, prefer vests of striking knitted patterns and play all
-coats. Persisti women prefer long flowing skirts with vivid patterns,
+manner of stringed instruments. Persisti women prefer long flowing
-ruffled into many layers combined with white shirts and jackets. Known
+skirts with vivid patterns, ruffled into many layers combined with
-for their beautiful jewellery, the women are adorned in necklaces and
+white shirts and jackets. Known for their beautiful jewellery, the
-large earrings and tend to ear their out in flowing dark curls.
+women are adorned in necklaces and large earrings and tend to wear
- = Note for Players =
+== Note for Players ==
-For inspiration players are to look toward Romani culture of eastern
+For inspiration, players are to look toward the Romani culture of
-culture and the traditional ways of Gypsie folk arcoss Europe in
+eastern Europe and the traditional ways of Gypsie folk in planning a
-planning a player character and in imagining interactions with Peristi
+player character and in imagining interactions with Peristi non-player
-non-player characters.  Persisti women do not have beards.
+characters. Persisti women do not have beards.

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 madness of their own rulers. To this day, the Persiti believe they are
 the antithesis to this and are highly suspsicious of hierarchical
-orhganisations, elvish or not.
+organisations, elvish or not.
-Nomadic dhwarves have abandoned their former gods and now leave these
+Peristi have abandoned their former gods and now leave these debates
-troubles to men and elves.
+to men and elves. But their songs and bardic tales are second to none
-Now Nomads in the outreaches and uplands beyond the Dyafice, their
+The majority of Persisti have an olive complexion and dark brown eyes.
-search for a homeland goes on.
+The men prefer moustaches and goatees to full beards, wear a wide
-  - black hair
+  = Note for Players =
- - moustaches and fancy sideburns rather than full beards
- - unbearded women with hoop earrings
+For inspiration players are to look toward Romani culture of eastern

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 Now Nomads in the outreaches and uplands beyond the Dyafice, their search for a homeland goes on.
   - black hair
   - moustaches and fancy sideburns rather than full beards
   - unbearded women with hoop earrings

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 Now Nomads in the outreaches and uplands beyond the Dyafice, their search for a homeland goes on.
-- black hair
+ - black hair
-- moustaches and fancy sideburns rather than full beards
+ - moustaches and fancy sideburns rather than full beards
-- unbearded women with hoop earrings
+ - unbearded women with hoop earrings

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