Captives of Bassamel Fight Back - Revision history

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 the nobles of Chilatore and the Governing Council of Claviscero.
 Having all recovered, the companions decide to continue their search
-for the mastermind behind the assasination attempt on Kuurok Day.  As they cross the River Chomb
+for the mastermind behind the assassination attempt on Kuurok Day.  As they cross the River Chomb
 again they return to the farm house on the other side of the bridge.
 Questioning the woman of the farm-house, the companions once again are

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 the nobles of Chilatore and the Governing Council of Claviscero.
 Having all recovered, the companions decide to continue their search
-for the mastermind behind the assination attempt on Kuurok Day.  As they cross the River Chomb
+for the mastermind behind the assasination attempt on Kuurok Day.  As they cross the River Chomb
 again they return to the farm house on the other side of the bridge.
 Questioning the woman of the farm-house, the companions once again are

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 the nobles of Chilatore and the Governing Council of Claviscero.
 Having all recovered, the companions decide to continue their search
-for leader of the Kuurok Day attack.  As they cross the River Chomb
+for the mastermind behind the assination attempt on Kuurok Day.  As they cross the River Chomb
 again they return to the farm house on the other side of the bridge.
 Questioning the woman of the farm-house, the companions once again are

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 the wolf.  The wolf bounces accross the floor, slamming into the wall
 and falling to the ground in a heap.  Pikemen come to the aid of Roima
-and drive their polearms into the paladin.  The injuries are servere
+and drive their polearms into the paladin.  The injuries are severe
 but Titus regains his composure and strikes back hard into the
-pikeman.  No match for the battle hardened witchhunter, the pikemen
+attackers.  No match for the battle hardened witchhunter, the pikemen
 are dispatched.  With only one companion left standing, the warrior
 swings his great axe but Titus deflects the blow.  Bassamel, badly
 wounded from the earlier stab in the back, struggles against the
 paladin.  Titus takes the advantage and drives the last breath from
-Bassamel with his sword.
+the imposing warrior.
 Stablising Fell and Arrius, Titus releases the captive farmer and

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 across the room and the axe of Bassamel smashes the thief Arrius to
 the ground.  He lies lifeless on the floor.  The wolf, as Fell,
-attacks Bassamel but he avoids serious injury swinging his axe into
+attacks Bassamel but Bassamel avoids serious injury swinging his axe into
 the wolf.  The wolf bounces accross the floor, slamming into the wall
-and filling to the group in a heap.  Pikemen come to the aid of Roima
+and falling to the ground in a heap.  Pikemen come to the aid of Roima
 and drive their polearms into the paladin.  The injuries are servere
 but Titus regains his composure and strikes back hard into the

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 building.
-Using a similar spell as that used in the attack at Clavisero, Roima
+Using a similar spell as that cast in the attack at Clavisero, Roima
 struggles to control the power of lightning emmanating from her out-thrust palms.  She misses in striking the strongarm of the tri-furs.
 Titus enters into striking rage of the sorcerer.  Melees continue

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 Using a similar spell as that used in the attack at Clavisero, Roima
-struggles to control th power of lightning at her finger tips and
+struggles to control the power of lightning emmanenting from out-thrust palms.  She misses in striking the strongarm of the tri-furs.
-misses in striking the storm of the tri-furs, Titus the Recursor.
 Titus enters into striking rage of the sorcerer.  Melees continue
 across the room and the axe of Bassamel smashes the thief Arrius to

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 Arrius hurls himself through the open window, thrusting his sword into
 Bassamel.  Titus charges through the front door, spots Roima Seermul,
-and engages the sorcerer.  Fell manifests the gifts of the Amagarti as
+and engages the sorcerer.  Fell manifests the power of Amagartum and shifts into his wolf form.  He silently steps through the back entrance of the
-a wolf quietly and silently steps through the back entrance of the
 building.

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 the farmer up in the hay shed.
-The companions move toward the edge of the winery wall and sneak along
+The companions move toward the edge of the winery wall, using its shadow to remain hidden.  They peer through the windows, trying to locate
-the outside wall.  They peer through the windows, trying to locate
 the assassin and their former captors.  They identify the helmed warrior, Bassamel and
 soldiers.  The companions organise themselves.  Fell decides to enter